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Yusuf wrote: Alma's Journey
Silently and alert, Alma sneakily crept down the eerie and narrow road. All was quiet and Alma's feet were treading on the soft, white scattered snow. A strong gust of wind blew next to and on Alma, her body was trembling as she tip-toed quietly unti (More)
Mr Fournier wrote: Suspense Writing
We have been working on suspense in our writing by using short sentences, repetition, empty words and a lot of dramatic vocabulary. First we analysed how other authors use these features in their writing. Now we are going to give it a try ourse (More)
Zakariya wrote: hamza an zak
As Hamza took a glimpse of a haunted house, he got scared like someone gave him an electric shot. His heart was pounding like a drum. When he got closer he was so  frightened. When he got even closer, he saw a shadow went past him. I wonder who it i (More)
Jeff took a heavy sigh as he spotted a mansion from a distance. He had a quick flashback from when his mother told him never to go near that horrifying mansion. But Jeff was so desperate. He had to find out more about it. He moved closer and closer. (More)
Max took a huge step into the building as the door creaked shut. Max heard screaming and other crazy noises. His heart was pounding. His soul was about to come out of him. He ran for his life. Suddenly, the door creaked open. This was his chance to (More)
Aaliyah wrote: Aaliyah and Mina
As Aaliyah and Mina took a deep breath, they tiptoed and tiptoed through the haunted house. Without warning, Aaliyah caught a glimpse of a weird shadow. They didn't know what it was. They were not allowed to go there. They both saw a giant. It was to (More)
Laybah wrote: Laybah and Sahnaz
Sumaiyah took a big deep breath as she looked at the spooky and scary building from miles away. She had a flashback from when her father told her never to go to that house. But Sumaiyah was so tempted. She had to find out more about it. She wanted to (More)
Michael took a deep breath as he looked at the haunted building from a far distance. At that moment, he saw a strange shadow flicking the lights on and off. Michael remembered what his dad said. "Do not go to the haunted house." He was tempted. He (More)
Sana wrote: Sana and lewin
Lily took a deep breath as she looked at the haunted school from in front of the door. Before she came out of her house, her mom told her not to go into that house. She wanted to go in the house but she had to go in to find out more. So she moved clo (More)
Ali took a deep breath as he walked past the abandoned house of spirits. As he took a long stare at the creepy house, it reminded him of his father clearly saying, "Stay away from that haunted house you know people have been missing there." In one wa (More)