The power of suspense by:Rayeema and Humairaa

THE POWER OF SUSPENSE

Chloe and Elle looked at the creepy nightmare house. They took some steps. ¬†Suddenly, a white soul peeped out. The windows creaked open. The gates close. The door opened. A ghost appeared. ¬†It came closer and closer. The girls’ hearts were pounding. They didn’t know what to do…

BY Humairaa and Rayeema

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  1. Amyma

    I like your character names and l like the suspense.
    does the ghost have a name?
    Maybe you can add more sentences

    Amyma

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