My favourite part was when Braun stroman could not keep up I thought it was so awesome because in some stories they catch up but in my story I was being creative Mr Fournier said he really liked the idea of the science lab.In my story Braun stroman followed a man which he saw in his garden he followed him to a science lab which was quite dirty.Nextoo the door was a halve drank bottle he thought he thought the man also drank that potion so he drank it also and after he drank it he pressed the button and he finally got through the door.But on the way he got stopped by a group of goblins and a chase started but Braun stroman went the wrong way so he had to turn around the guards were closing in and they were getting closer and closer and closer.
the man sniggerd pushed him whilst chuking the potion on the door to make the key on the other side.
Henry grappled the teleporter handle and went through. He found the cat house and smashed the broken tile . Henry got a ladder and climbed on the ladder. He went out the cat house and went home to his favourite game console. “Henry where have you been “? I thought that you were playing in your room playing your game your game console said mum.”I was bored playing my console so I went outside to the park to get lots of oxygen,fresh air and learn nature said Henry”.
Lily was playing with her rabbit Fluffy. With a jump out of no where, a ginger cat ran by, muttering “Oh dear where is my jungle ,” Lily followed her looking scared . She went through the cat hole.
Lily found herself in a beautiful and colourful jungle.The guards recognise she was a human . They chased her faster, faster, faster when Lily got rid of them ,she found the jungle throne , the queen of the jungle said” You join my band for my party!” demanded the queen .
“But I come from earth , I followed this cat,” sobbed Lily. The queen yelled at Lily saying “I will have you arrested in the dungeon,” ” But that isn’t fair ” “If you don’t want to go to jail then you have to play in my band , ” shouted the queen . Lily didn’t go to the band she escaped but the guards chased her ……
one beautiful morning there lived a girl her name was wanda.she lived in stuning mansion .One day in the evning she went out to play in her park .suddenly,she saw a leprecon .It had a big hat.”Oh dear wears my rainbow!”said the leprocon.Suddenly, a portal apeerd in a tree.She peeped in.
Then the leprocon flu in Wanda folode .suddenly ,she came into the most magical,mistical,and colourful rainbow land in the world.suddenly,the portal disappeared .”oh no!”she shouted Wanda.”I need to find a way back utherwise I haft to stay hear for ever and ever.
Jenna wilson was playing in the park in pakistan.When she saw a cat and the cat said “oh dear,oh dear wheres my home!”.The cat led Jenna wilson to a spooky woods with wild animals in the woods.It was abandoned.
Jenna wilson got to the woods and start exploring the woods.The woods look scary,gloomy,with spider webs and it is dark.
zaky was playing in his garden. Zaky seen a dog saying oh! my gosh i lost my parents.so he decided to follow the dog.The dog led him to a fountun.
Then the dog disappeared
Emily was Racing with her cousin and then she saw a wolf that was saying oh dear where my forest.
Emily saw a magical forest and She was shouting She
jakybond was living in a bais he herd something. He saw puss in boot shouted o”h no” . In a green and black vrotex he steps aaaaahhhhh…..
one summery day rosy and here mom were playing foot ball . The ball was lost so she went to find it she found a unicorn that said, “were,s my children”
The unicorn ate a flower puff! .The unicorn disappeared so rosy ate a flower
Sasuke was spying on his sister when a super,secret spy squirrel started shouting,”Oh dear,where’s my hole?”Sasuke was so intrigued by what he saw that he followed the squirrel to the forbidden tree.”I hope find something cool”
Ella and her sister Lucy lived in a flat house.There were playing with their friends in the garden. But suddenly lucy saw a lion ran past her. And she fell in.”Ahhhhhhh.
She was in a mysterious place.”Where am I she said to myself.she felt sad she wanted to go home.
So she saw a lion and she got super scared. She wanted to go home.”who are you I am Lucy.Who are you I am king Phillap of the Jungle.
She ran through the Jungle playground and the mouintin
in a land called something in the hills there was a hobbit hole.there lived a fat ogre who was eaten by wargs then there lived a hobbit called max he was friends with a stone giant.the stone giant lived in the mountains with the goblins and ogres who died because of the stone giants. one day when max was eating a goblin he heard screaming he looked out side and saw goblins dying.
Lucy fallowed the man and she lost the man the man go to the tree. A lady followed the man she make in gerul
Lucy went to the tree and she fall in. Lucy see a big mushroom. she see a big purpl tree. she bumped into a witch
Amyma was playing with her sister laybah they both lived in a rich place.They were playing skipping when they stopped then a mountain lion went past them.Roaring really loudly we got scared and laybah was screaming.
Harry was playing a drum and then he found a fish in the sand and placed the fish in the sea.Then he saw all of the fish in the sand and got a big bucit and put all of fish and put all of the fish in the sea.
One sunny day there was a girl called Lucy She lived in a big house and she was rich she was playing in her bedroom and then she looked out side. she saw a cute cat saying “Oh no I’m lost how do
messi was kicking the ball around on a field when suddenly he saw a goblin out of nowhere and then Messi decided to follow it.
Messi ran after the goblin and opened a door and the door closed automatically.The thing that was strong to him was that he was in a swamp.The swamp was yucky and green Messi felt scared.
Messi met a witch and the witch gave him a strong potion. The witch said to him “only use it if you need it” Messi said ok. Messi wished that he was at home. The witch chased Messi! Messi fell into a river and he swam to the nearest island. Next he ran into a zoo. He bumped into giraffes and other animals.Finally he was running through a jungle.He ran faster and faster and faster.
Messi ran so fast that he saw the portal and he jumped into the portal but there was a problem there was another portal on top and he remembered that he had the grow potion and he jumped through
sky was playing basketball on the road the monster appeared and started chasing sky.
jack was playing football and he saw a black panther. jack fold the black panther he was running and there was a forest and front of the forest of the forest it was a little hole jack falldown and it was very dork and spooky
suddenly jack was so scared he said o i how to go am for for to big to go throug
One snowy day Molove was was playing football at the park, with his pet is tiger. he was playing fetch with his pet.”OH NO!” said Molove. the tiger run and run and run until he went to the pond. The tiger jumped. OH NO said Molove !
And he got drowned fell down . How could I get out of hear . and Molove said who are you said molove. the evil man was playing hide and seek. can I play with said molove. the evil man said i will chop off your arm . NO NO said molove
Can i play said molove. I told you i will chop of your arm .
Can i chase you. go on said molove the evil man. go on chase me
once upon a time there was a little boy called Siyam he lived in Birmingham with his mum and dad. one day he followed a lion to it’s cave.
Siyam was shocked,when he went into the cave. Siyam saw a magical world of junk food.”oh my gosh”Siyam gasped. Siyam wanted to stay but he had to go home other wise his dad was going to shout at him.
Siyam went to the king and said.”can i go back home””no you can not go back home”the only way you can go back home is if you complete three tasks said the king.”i don’t care what you say,i want to go home right NOW!””Complete those three tasks or my lion’s will chop your head of”said the king.”NO!” said Siyam. “Of with his head”Said the king.
Siyam ran and ran and ran but the lion’s paws got louder and louder and louder.as quick as a flash Siyam jumped into a bush so the lion’s can’t find him.
Next to Siyam was a potion that said “ZIP ME”Siyam drank the bottle and safely.
Max was playing croquet. Suddenly, he saw a bat fly past. The bat dropped in a deep hole. That it had been burnt unfortunately max lost his balance and tumbled down and down and down.
Max fell in a burnt house that was on fire. Max ran out and started searching around danger world. Then he found the king in his chair, “Hello were did you come from?”
“I came from Birmingham. but have you played block buster.”
“No you will play with me!”
Henry grappled the teleporter handle and went through. He found the cat house and smashed the broken tile. He got a ladder and climbed on the ladder. He went out the cat house and went home to his favourite ps3 game connsul.” where have you been Henry”
Over the past week the students have been working on writing some stories. They have been working very hard and really wanted to share parts of them with the world! Have a read through and don’t forget to comment on them!